The graph illustrates the difference of buying and consuming coffee and tea in five Australian cities in last 4 weeks, namely Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart.
Overall, it is immediately obvious that individuals are more likely to go to a coffee store rather than other activities. In addition, the number of residents who bought fresh coffee is smallest in five cities.
To begin, in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane and Hobart, the figures of people went for coffee or tea are significantly higher than other hobbies, at 61%, 62.5%, 55.5% and 62.5% respectively. A opposite trend was witnessed in Adelaide, this number is slightly lower than the number people bought instant coffee (about 0.5%).
Moreover, in Brisbane, the proportion of residents who bought fresh coffee experienced the lowest rate at 34% and this number is slightly smaller in Adelaide with 34.5%. This figure in Melbourne is gradually higher than in Hobart at 43% and 37% respectively. The percentage of local people in Sydney bought fresh coffee is 45%, which is bigger than the rate individual bought instant coffee by 3%.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24022346369 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74724043059 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564245810056 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4894350476 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.25 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 5.23603664747 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129512531475 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629647514908 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473753513891 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948638667921 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447152274272 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.