The chart illustrates information about a survey in Britain and how many people visited different tourist attractions. Four types of attractions are presented in percentage in one chart and the table shows places chosen by tourists for one category.
What's interesting is that the majotity of tourists visit museum and galleries in Britain and this number of people is represented by a percentage of 37%. It has a great culture which can be known if people vistit these places. A small minority wants to see wildlife parks and zoo because the other tourists find historical information about the country in other places. Historic houses and monuments are visited by a bigger percentage of 16%. People find this country interesting because it shares great monuments and art pieces. Theme parks are a common target for al people bacause they can have fun with all the family. Parks organise different interactive activities for all ages and they have rollercoasters and machines which entertain people.For instance ,the most visited place is Blackpool Pleasure Beach by 47 percent of tourists, while Legoland and Chessington World of Adventures are visited by a percent of 10%. Alton Tower and Pleasureland reach 17% and 16% people per year .
In conclusion, tourists are looking for entertainment and historical activities. They choose to have fun in a theme park or to find out information about the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20175438596 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88214238417 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574561403509 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 283.868780488 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.4354666836 43.030603864 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8333333333 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190979757215 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734004774397 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697142479038 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15321807822 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10748869512 0.0819641961636 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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