The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999
The pie chart compares the proportion of visitors who came four different kinds of tourist places and to five categories of places in theme park in UK in 1999.
It is clear that both theme parks and museums and galleries were the most popular types of tourist attraction. Furthermore, blackpool pleasure beach attracted the highest proportion of visitor among a lot places of theme parks.
At 38% percentages of tourism spent their time for theme parks and 37% was figure for museums and galleries. By contrast, rate of people came to wildlife parks and zoos was the lowest. It can be seen that there was slightly higher in the proportion of visitor visited to historic houses and monuments, reached 16%.
Out of all categories of theme park places, blackpool pleasure beach account for the highest rates at nearly half of all. Chessington World of Adventure and Legoland and Windsor attracted the same the number of tourists, but the figure for both of there were the lowest, just only 10%. The similar pattern can be seen for Alton Towers and Pleasureland and Southport, the percentage of visitor each place attracted was about from 16% to 17%.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89743589744 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55054879297 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574358974359 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.9915395981 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.111111111 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112725575103 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477497277484 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477112834315 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0801654608088 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529947565693 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.