The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.
The diagrams illustrate the milestones of salmon life, from birth to maturity.
Overall, there are three main stages in the cycle of salmon fish. Salmon spend time in their lives in three district locations, moving from upper river to lower rivers to open sea and then return back.
Salmon begins their lives in upper river where adult fishes lay their eggs in small tone hidden among the reeds. After approximately five or six months, eggs emerge to baby salmon, called "fry". These fries measure between three and eight centimetres in length. Then, they spend the next stage in lower river where has fast following and stay there about four years, still they grow to smolt. When becoming the smolt, their length reach from twelve to fifteen centimetres.
Finally stage, smolt fishes migrate to open sea and live there until they become adult fish, called "salmon". This stage takes about five years of salmon's life. After this period, the full growth salmon travel back to upper river in order to reproduct and lay their eggs. Then, a new cycle begins.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 189, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...er to lower rivers to open sea and then return back. Salmon begins their lives in upper ri...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...ch from twelve to fifteen centimetres. Finally stage, smolt fishes migrate to open sea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02234636872 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37300654785 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631284916201 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4148457072 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9166666667 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9166666667 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205905532723 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877201051246 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744209236059 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153854686209 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557429582747 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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