The diagram below shows the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.
The diagram illustrates the information about the life cycle of fish which has three main stages of their lifetime.
Considering the first stage, It represents salmon eggs store the upper river because of It has slow-moving water. So these eggs had been interposed small stones which were supplied protection for eggs also reeds trees gave their co-operation to safe eggs. After approximately 5 or 6 months these ovums converted to small fish which is called as a "fry". Fry has a plethora of appearences and significant length. it has been growing between 3cm and 8cm while they swan to the lower river and it has fast-flowing water relatively upper river. The fry spent only 4 years on the upper side while they grew up as a smolt. Smolt developed instead of fry and have a maximum of 15cm length. After their second life, They moved to open sea so smolt built up to adult salmon which has been maximum length was approximately 76cm. The majority of their life was spent in the open sea as a smolt. Finally, adult salmon went to the upper river to propagate their nation such as reproduction.
To sum up, The salmon has various lifetime and considering the above diagram the total lifetime of salmon will be approximately 10 years.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... of appearences and significant length. it has been growing between 3cm and 8cm wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, second, so, while, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80465116279 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74097565462 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567441860465 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5395215488 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0833333333 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150226850155 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548841146974 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625249066287 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138323971977 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570503604292 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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