The diagram below demonstrates the three major steps of the life cycle of large fish namely salmon.
Initially, under the slow flow of water, the eggs are laid by adult salmon between the small stones surrounded by reeds where the eggs take 5 to 6 months in order to hatch, and further, the fry salmons take birth with a length of 3 to 8 cm; thereafter, move to fast-flowing which is called lower river where they grow in the time duration of approximately 4 years, and become smolt. Afterward, they survive in the open sea for 5 years until they are ready to transform into adult salmon with a length of 70 to 76 cm.
Overall, having taken an overview of the above-mentioned information, it can be clearly notified that this is the natural process that takes place from time to time from laying eggs to adult salmon.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 676.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56756756757 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57977184851 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675675675676 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 202.5 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.295471086 43.030603864 254% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 169.0 112.824112599 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.0 22.9334400587 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 5.23603664747 10% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149113111147 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106893958874 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113010507899 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132019400524 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119547086624 0.0819641961636 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.2329268293 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 61.2550243902 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.82 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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