The pie graph elucidates the information about the distribution of visitors in four different categories to tourist attraction and five various theme parks in Britain in 1999.
It is evident from the pie chart that most of people were visit in theme parks which is followed by museums and galleries that were prefferd by tourists. There were some people who love animals therefore they visited wild life park and Zoos that is 9%. Moreover, 16 percent individuals also interested in historic houses and Monuments.
Leaping further, it is vivid from the given graph that theme parks were prefferd by visitors in which Blackpool Pleasure Bleach was most popular with 47% and Pleasureland Southport park was visited by almost half of the former people that is 16%. However, the Alton Towers park was preferred by 17% masses a tourist attraction. Additionally, same number of tourists were attract towards Chessington world of Adventures and Legoland, Windsor Parks that is 10%.
Overall, it can be stated that theme parks and museums and galleries were most popular places among tourists in Britain.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 39, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
... It is evident from the pie chart that most of people were visit in theme parks which is foll...
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Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'attracted'.
Suggestion: attracted
...itionally, same number of tourists were attract towards Chessington world of Adventures...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18539325843 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61959852405 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595505617978 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0647133383 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.375 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173508024483 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799068175618 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516096277554 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115012170639 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429784947373 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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