The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

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The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The given bar graph gives information about international trade of five types of products for particular country between 2015 and 2016. While the table illustrates the proportion of change in values for every type of exports compared to 2015.
In general, although the two highest profits for particular country came from petroleum and engineered products, the lowest income for this country was from gems and jewellery products.
In 2015, the country earned around 60 and 57 million dollars from petroleum products and engineered goods respectively. Whilst the profit for this state is a half of petroleum products, it is just $ 31. The least income was from textiles, it is around 27 million dollars. Turning to 2016, it can be seen that a slight increase in the income from agricultural products by 1 million. Whereas a remarkable rose occurred in engineered goods, and textiles, it is just about 5 million.
A table illustrated that the change percentage of the gems and jewellery decreased to 5.18%. this proportion was not as many as one in engineered goods, it is 8.5%. Furthermore, the highest changing rate happened in textiles products, it increased by 15.24%. On contrary, the lowest difference percentage occurred in agriculture products, it is just 0.81%

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$31'.
Suggestion: $31
... half of petroleum products, it is just $ 31. The least income was from textiles, it...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...und 27 million dollars. Turning to 2016, it can be seen that a slight increase in...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... gems and jewellery decreased to 5.18%. this proportion was not as many as one in en...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n agriculture products, it is just 0.81%
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, well, whereas, while, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20487804878 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90706995227 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546341463415 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3355081638 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9166666667 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153590981738 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607985779855 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692062430301 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103158518357 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813069826536 0.0819641961636 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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