the two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourists facilities
The given maps give information about an island before and after the building many services for visitors.
Overall, the first impression from given map is that the new design contain some facilities such as restaurant, reception, and accommodation which not exist in old one.
From old design, it can be seen that there are some trees in the east and north sides of the island. Furthermore, in the west of island, there has been a beach.
From new design, it can be observed that some tents are added in the south of island as well as a reception is constructed in the middle of island and connected by vehicle track to these tents. Moreover, the restaurant is built in the north of island to prepare delicious meals to resistances. In addition, two groups of tents are created in the east and west of reception and connected by footpath to each other as well as to beach to allow the visitors to swim in the sea. Some of the landmarks are added up to new design compared with old one.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... an island before and after the building many services for visitors. Overall, th...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
... allow the visitors to swim in the sea. Some of the landmarks are added up to new design co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, moreover, so, well, as to, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 810.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5251396648 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53989115828 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541899441341 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.906158268 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.25 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 5.23603664747 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248897033241 0.215688989381 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987869407119 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630736604356 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14931134255 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537647975112 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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