The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters traveling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.

Essay topics:

The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters traveling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.

The line chart illustrates the average numbers of British passengers who travel every day by automobile, bus, or train between the years 1970 and 2030. Measured in million
In general, it can be observed that the using of cars and train increase along the given period, while the users of bus declines at the end of the period.

Beginning with cars, it can be seen that, 5 million English passengers used cars for 10 years (1970-1980) to move between areas. In 2000 the number rose significantly to approximately 7 million. Then remain stable until 2010. The expectation for the number of commuters will be increased to around 8 million and 9 million in 2020, and 2030 respectively.

Moving to use of train, the number of commuters was around 2 million in 1970, then increased gradually to 3 million in 2000. The number remained the same until 2010. While the prediction of traveled passengers by train will jump rapidly to 5 million, which is less than using cars.
Finally, it can be witnessed, more people using the bus in their transportation in 1970, around 4 million, whereas the number will be decreased slowly to 3 million in 2030, which the lowest mean transportation in 2030 by UK passengers.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...en the years 1970 and 2030. Measured in million In general, it can be observed that th...
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Line 7, column 236, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ransportation in 2030 by UK passengers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, then, whereas, while, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85024154589 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77951216596 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0318558068 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.4 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271376201024 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1131069497 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931075490192 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172161564553 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863938275255 0.0819641961636 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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