The chart below shows the value of one country s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016 The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015

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The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The bar chart and the table with corresponding numerical data depict the change in the export levels of a variety of categories from 2015 to 2016, represented in the percentage terms.
As could be noticed from the empirical data, there are five product categories that are exported by a country. The second to none in terms of export value in billions USD are petroleum products, while the second place with the insignificant gap is taken by the engineered goods. Three other product categories can be united in one group since their dollar value does not exceed USD 45 billion.
Diving deeper into details, four out of five export categories, except for the gems and jewellery that showed a decline of slightly more than 5%, increased in value in 2015 in comparison to the results of 2015. The greatest spike was demonstrated by the Textile goods the export of which sharply rose by more than 15% to approximately USD 32 billion. The second greatest change in export was demonstrated by Engineered products, rising by 8.5%. Interestingly, that this particular move allowed this category to almost reach the dollar value of petroleum products export, which in turn showed only 3% from the level of 2016.
Summarising, it is important to mention that there was no change in places taken by the aforementioned product categories.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, well, while, except for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1111.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0045045045 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80506241141 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572072072072 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5404308795 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.444444444 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3528937241 0.215688989381 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135129853698 0.103423049105 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970594438058 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202187060805 0.15604864568 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124913302147 0.0819641961636 152% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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