Nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company or organisation Why might this be the case What could be the disadvantages of being self employed

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case?
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

The philosophical question of Shakespeare ‘to be or not to be’ in the reality of the 21st century is stated as ‘to be self-employed or not to be self-employed’. A great many of people now prefer to be fully independent and work as freelancers, meaning that they choose the preferred working hours, the home office, and the workload. At the same time, the absolute majority still commutes to work daily and deeply depends on the organizational structure and mood of their bosses.
It is an open secret, that the self-employed have a pretty long list of advantages, flexibility, as well as advanced work-life balance, being the primal ones. For instance, a freelancer could work from any point in the world no matter whether the location is in the same country with its client or he/she is executing the project from Bali, sitting in a shade of a palm tree near the ocean. What is more, self-employed employee is not spending hours on commuting to work, when the road are packed during the rush hours. As an instance, I could also mention the tax regime applied in Russia to those who work as entrepreneurs or freelancers, since the tax rate is three times less than that for all the traditional workers.
On the other hand, working from home office and being self-employed assumes the person to be highly motivated, responsible, and self-driven, since the freelance regime gives the entrepreneur a countless number of distractions and opportunities to relax even when the work is not done properly. For example, in the USA there exist numerous amount of cases when a person tried to set up its own business, succeeded, but then, unfortunately, lost the power of self-control and went bankrupt due to procrastination or laziness. The strong depiction of another disadvantage of self-employment could be found in various books of the Russian authors, such as Dostoevsky or Tolstoy. The main characters in their books, as a rule, are the employees of state organizations, meaning that they have a widespread network of relationships and interconnections, who can help the key heros to resolve an issue. And it is definitely the case even in the current reality, while freelancers sometimes lack the business partners who can do them a favor in the situation of need.
As a conclusion, after observing the aforementioned examples, it is true that self-employment is a great opportunity to escape from the well-known disadvantages of working for a company, it still has a list of disadvantages that could only be mitigated by strong personal commitment and motivation of a person who has chosen to be a freelancer.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, then, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, it is true, what is more, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2183.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 437.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99542334096 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25212605936 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553775743707 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 671.4 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 9.0 2.10420841683 428% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.2934637846 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.923076923 106.682146367 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.6153846154 20.7667163134 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.458327004498 0.244688304435 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159538017409 0.084324248473 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142177376213 0.0667982634062 213% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298012268199 0.151304729494 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785883558989 0.056905535591 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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