The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.
The diagram depicts the process of electricity generation that takes place in the hydroelectric station. Overall, the whole procedure consists of separate stages and involves the usage of a variety of machinery that intake water to generate electricity.
As could be seen in the diagram, the water from the river is stored in the high-level reservoir until it is supplied to the power station. The power station is separated from the water storage with the dam that is open during the day time, when water flow generate electricity, and this dam is kept closed at nights, when the flow of water is pumped up. Once the water supplied to the power station it goes through the reversible turbines performing two different processes occur. During the day these turbines operate generator. And at night these machines do not work as generator operators and just pump water back into the high-level reservoir.
As for the latest stage of the electricity generation process is it consists of two different actions. The first action is the supply of the electric power from the generator to the power lines and then further to the national grid, where the power is consumed by a variety of institutions as well as residents. The second action is daily water transmission to the low-level reservoir and reversed process of water pumping occurring during the night period.
Looking from the overall perspective, the process is sophisticated and allows to meet the demand of citizens, businesses, and governmental bodies for electricity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 354, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s, when the flow of water is pumped up. Once the water supplied to the power station...
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Line 2, column 649, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ter back into the high-level reservoir. As for the latest stage of the electricity...
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Line 4, column 79, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'meeting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: meeting
...the process is sophisticated and allows to meet the demand of citizens, businesses, and...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, so, then, well, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 965.302439024 133% => OK
No of words: 250.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.128 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80976582654 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 283.868780488 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2214020859 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.545454545 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234807710065 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103690639489 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109635483682 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14500113057 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0935768181734 0.0819641961636 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 40.7170731707 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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