The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.
diagram depicts the process of electricity generation that takes place in the hydroelectric station. Overall, the whole procedure consists of separate stages and involves the usage of a variety of machinery that intake water to generate electricity.
As it could be seen in the diagram, the water from the river is stored in the high-level reservoir until it is supplied to the power station. The power station is separated from the water storage with the dam that is open during the day time, when water flow generate electricity, and this dam is kept closed at nights, when the flow of water is pumped up. Once the water is supplied to the power station, it goes through the reversible turbines performing two different processes occur. During the day these turbines operate generator. And at night these machines do not work as generator operators and just pump water back into the high-level reservoir.
Observing the latest stage of the electricity generation process, one can notice that it consists of two different actions. The first action is the supply of the electric power from the generator to the power lines and then further to the national grid, where the power is consumed by a variety of institutions as well as residents. The second action is daily water transmission to the low-level reservoir and reversed process of water pumping occurring during the night period.
Looking from the overall perspective, the process is sophisticated and constructed with the aim to satisfy the increased demand of citizens, businesses, and governmental bodies for electricity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Diagram
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 965.302439024 138% => OK
No of words: 257.0 196.424390244 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17509727626 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83232669733 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525291828794 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 283.868780488 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5781135423 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.909090909 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232939862218 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102241110346 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109526897058 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143815858686 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931994296769 0.0819641961636 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 40.7170731707 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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