The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The diagram depicts the current plan of the university sport center infrastructure and how it will look after the refurbishment takes place.
As can be seen from two layouts, outdoor courts on the west side will be replaced by the brand-new leisure pool with changing rooms in a close proximity to it. In addition, one can noticed that the previous right-hand sided outdoor area will become the place for a covered sports hall, two dance studios, and changing facilities. These particular changes will attract not only the students who are keen on sport, but also different visitors who just want to enjoy well-developed infrastructure with lots of opportunities.
As for the central part of the layouts, it will not be modernized significantly. The 25m pool along with changing rooms on the west, sport gym on the north, and places for seating on the east will not be transformed at all. However, the fronting area, that comprises only a reception room at present, will be extended. The left area, near to the changing rooms of the leisure pool, will incorporate the sports shop, with wide range of sports apparel and accessories. In addition to it, in the right corridor the café, which will provide healthy dining options, will be situated.
Summarising the aforementioned innovation plans, the well-developed university sport center will better serve the desires and demand of both university students and external visitors. What is more, the modernized center will facilitate the university prosperity and will attract greater funds.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 138, Rule ID: CLOSE_SCRUTINY[1]
Message: Use simply 'proximity'.
Suggestion: proximity
...w leisure pool with changing rooms in a close proximity to it. In addition, one can noticed tha...
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Line 2, column 273, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...rea will become the place for a covered sports hall, two dance studios, and changing f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, well, as for, in addition, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 1.00243902439 1496% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 965.302439024 134% => OK
No of words: 249.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19678714859 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9079411403 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 106.607317073 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578313253012 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 283.868780488 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5729555606 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.636363636 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6363636364 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164918080176 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075780168877 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589679904183 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133250326852 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678003252339 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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