The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years Summarize the information by selecting and reporting t

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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart illustrates the work destinations of undergraduates from Anthropology university and the table reflects the information about salaries of workers in anthropology industry 5 years later graduation from university.
Looking from an overall perspective, we notice that majority of graduates (above a half of respondents) are employed full-time and minority (only 5%) prefers to work part-time to combine employment with postgrad study. Turning to data table, the salaries of Antropology graduates are unevenly distributed: the half of employees in government sector have salaries above 100 thousand dollars.
As can be seen from the chart, 15% of graduates have part-time work, that correlates with proportion of workers in government and freelance sector who get from 50 thousand to almost 75 thousand dollars per month. As many as two-fifth of freelance consultants have their salaries in diapasons from 75 to 99,9 thousand dollars and also more than 100000 dollars.
Regarding the remaining areas of respondents, unemployed graduates comprise 12% of the surveyed and only 8% of undergraduates try to balance postgrad study with full-time employment. The last is almost equal to proportion of private companies’ workers (10%) who get their salaries in quantity of 25 000- 49,999 dollars. In this sector the difference in income distribution is rather moderate, what can be noticeable in the most number of employees with salaries under 75 thousand dollars equals to only 35%.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, regarding, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 965.302439024 130% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50877192982 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11119217896 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561403508772 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 283.868780488 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.7016413688 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.0 112.824112599 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183419206809 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882836551018 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862589220365 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13922312079 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100967164876 0.0819641961636 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.2329268293 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.4329268293 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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