The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years Summaries the information by selecting and reporting t

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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their
undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five
years.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons
where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.

The pie chart compares the percentage of different destinations which Anthropology graduated individuals engage in after university, whereas the table illustrates the proportion of wages received by these Anthropologists after 5 years’ work.

It is clear that the majority of Anthropologists are involved in full-time jobs. Additionally, a haft of post-graduate individuals working for the Government sector could make over $100000 after 5 years.

Looking at the pie chart, 52% of graduates were working full-time, which accounted for the highest figure in the chart. Meanwhile, part-time workers and unemployed people took up 15% and 12% of the university’s graduates respectively. While the percentages of full-time postgrad study students and the unknown group were identical, at 8%, compared to 5% of graduates for an unknown and postgraduate study group.

Looking at the table, the percentage of employees working for the Government sector, and earning more than $100000 accounted for 50%, whereas the figure for those in Freelance consultants was 40%. At the same time, 35% of postgrad Anthropologists choosing to work in Private companies got paid between $50.000 and $74.999. In addition, the quantities of Freelance consultants and government sector employees making from $25.000 to $49.999 were equal, 15% at each.

Votes
Average: 5 (2 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, whereas, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1128.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25039997539 2.65546596893 122% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1286654926 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.333333333 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1541105513 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698549116682 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066406903493 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115645416517 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744102149725 0.0819641961636 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 11.4140731707 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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