The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after 5 years.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relavent
The pie chart below illustrates the variegated Destination of Anthropology students (in percentage) after graduation from one particular University, which is subdivided into 6 parts (Full-time work, Part-time work, Part-time work + postgrad study, Full-time postgrad study, Unemployed and Not known). Followed by this, the salaries of these graduates and employment type (after 5 years’ work) are juxtaposed using a tabular column.
Overall, the majority of alumni fall under the category of Full-time work whereas the proportion of graduates is least in Part-time work + postgrad study subdivision. Considering the tabulation, half of the highest paid Anthropology graduates are working in the Government sector.
From the chart, the percentage of graduates who chose Part-time employment (15%) are the second highest, followed by which are the unemployed alumni (12%). The categories Full -time postgrad study and Not known share the same proportion of students (8% each).
In the table, 60% of the Freelance consultants, 80% of graduates in Government sector and 55% of graduates working in Private companies have a salary ranging from $75,000- $100,000+. The percentage of students who have a salary ranging from $25,000- $74,999 are tantamount in categories of Freelance consultants and Government sector (25%), while Private companies subdivision have 45% of graduates.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: charts
The pie chart below illustrates the variegated Destin...
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...nd Government sector 25%, while Private companies subdivision have 45% of graduates.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72413793103 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04053910496 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527093596059 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6289977315 43.030603864 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.25 112.824112599 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.375 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175541616645 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857191853013 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521892066646 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108124397926 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560242357115 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 61.2550243902 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 11.4140731707 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.4329268293 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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