The chart gives information about the amount of oil discovered worldwide from 1950 to 2020

Essay topics:

The chart gives information about the amount of oil discovered worldwide from 1950 to 2020.

The bar chart provides information about how much oil barrel was discovered globally from 1950 to 2005 and the amount that is projected to be found onwards up to year 2020.

Overall, there was an increase in the amount of oil that was discovered for the first ten years but it then fluctuated and considerably plummeted 45 years after. It is also foreseen that the amount of oil that will be uncovered will continue to decrease in the future.

To start with, twenty billion barrels of oil were found during 1950. Following 5 years later, people discovered 25 billion of barrels and then a significant rise in oil barrel was uncovered in year 1960 at about 58 billion that year. It should be noted that the discovery reached its peak in year 1965, finding a little less than 60 billion barrels of oil. After that, there was a notable drop of oil discovery, amounting to 45 billion barrels, in year 1970 and eventually a fluctuation afterwards but on downward trend reaching 7 billion barrel in 2005.

In the future, according to data presented, it is foreseen that in 2010 the finding will increase slightly for about 10 billion barrels and then it will further decrease to approximately 4 billion barrels.

Votes
Average: 8.7 (2 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78571428571 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61454591471 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9827736165 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.625 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228784030376 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117909591205 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114771275855 0.0843802449381 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173976563902 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143628662827 0.0819641961636 175% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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