The chart gives information about sports played by young people by gender in Great Britain

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The chart gives information about sports played by young people by gender in Great Britain

The chart gives information about sports played by young people by gender in Great Britain. It can be seen that there are several different kinds of sports that teenagers there take part in.
As the chart shows, girls’ participation in swimming and cycling accounts for the highest percentage, as 53% and 50% of total girls attend in respectively. The other sports which acquire more physical health are less attractive, with less than 30% of female teenagers choosing each. Among them, the percentage of girls playing football is the lowest, as only 15% of them participate in this sport.
In contrast, there are much more boys selecting football, as the football percentage is the highest, about 67%. Cycling is the second popular sport among boys, with nearly 60% of them take part in it and the third popular one is swimming, as the figure is about 57%. Similar to girls’ figures, tennis, walking, hiking and blading/boarding attract them the least since less than 30% of the boys asked choosing each.
It is clearly to notice that except for football in which boys are more interested in than girls, there are hardly any considerate differences in figures by both genders.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 123, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'several'.
Suggestion: several
... Britain. It can be seen that there are several different kinds of sports that teenagers there ta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, third, except for, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02525252525 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66567646905 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.3536509852 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.555555556 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26714075432 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147331994632 0.103423049105 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.302644304507 0.0843802449381 359% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193332722322 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.249950698604 0.0819641961636 305% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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