The chart gives a more detailed look at changes in the consumption of such personal items as stereos, tennis racquets, perfumes, CDs, toys, and photographic films in four selected European countries.
The chart gives a more detailed look at changes in consumption of such personal items as stereos, tennis racquets, perfumes,CDs, toys and photographic films in four selected European countries.
Overall, the costs of each country are not evenly distributed. It is apparent from the graph that the UK is responsible for the largest spending on consumer goods,with purchasing ranging from 155 to 175 thousand pounds sterling. France lags behind by a narrow margin, its costs fluctuate from 143 to 170 thousand pounds sterling. The group composed of Germany and Italy levelled off at about 145 thousand pounds sterling, whatever item it is.
Going into details, photographic film seems to be the most expensive consumor good for the UK and France and stands at about 170 thousand pounds sterling. Toys appeared to be the most valuable item for Italy at expense of approximately 158 thousand pounds sterling.
Regarding variation in the value of goods, personal stereos and tennis racquets appear to be the cheapest personal items with costs ranging from 143 to 147 thousand pounds sterling.
- Computer games are a waste of time Do you agree or disagree 70
- Memorising facts is a superior skill for successful learning Do you agree or disagree 89
- The diagram shows the manufacturing process of bricks Describe the process 78
- Summarise the points in the lecture and explain how they cast doubt on the point made in the reading 90
- It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends Do you agree or disagree 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 124, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , CDs
...ms as stereos, tennis racquets, perfumes,CDs, toys and photographic films in four se...
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Line 2, column 162, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , with
...r the largest spending on consumer goods,with purchasing ranging from 155 to 175 thou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23428571429 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75888176105 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605714285714 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4968748851 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294493857462 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140283509666 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.218697039609 0.0843802449381 259% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24741199371 0.15604864568 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.267916732612 0.0819641961636 327% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.