The chart shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries

Essay topics:

The chart shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries

The given bar graph compares how the amount of money is spent on six various items in four European countries namely Germany, Italy, France and Britain.
According to graph, Britain demonstrates higher consumption of all goods, especially, there is the biggest proportion of money which is distributed on photographic film and toys being about 170 and 165 thousand pounds sterling respectively while personal stereos and tennis racquets account for the lowest amount being the same with 150 thousand pounds sterling in this country.
By contrast, France came to the close Britain the spending of photographic film, toys and CDs whereas Italy takes a leader the utilization of personal stereos, tennis racquets and perfumes after Britain. In Germany, all consumer goods indicate the smallest proportion of money with around 150 thousand pounds sterling.
Overall, British spending is considerably higher than that of other countries in every case while Germany is generally the lowest spender.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50980392157 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68877799473 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633986928105 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.0705001565 43.030603864 221% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.6 112.824112599 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6 22.9334400587 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154229443555 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891244748379 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103115850447 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101890947197 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106870354667 0.0819641961636 130% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.2329268293 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 61.2550243902 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.27 11.4140731707 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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