The chart shows the division of household tasks by gender in Great Britain.

Essay topics:

The chart shows the division of household tasks by gender in Great Britain.

The bar chart, coupled with the attached table, compares the time spent of each household chores that performed by both sexes in Great Britain. All in all, the data differ significantly.

As shown in the information provided, tasks in kitchen was in a dominant position in time consumption over all household activities, whereby males and females consume 30 minutes and 74 minutes per day respectively. Likewise, the time consumed by women on cleaning and house tidying was quadruple that of men. Noteworthy is the pattern that hours spent by male on gardening and pet care doubled that of female, while women consume twofold time in child-caring compared to men.

Evidently, among the six activities, the minutes daily spent on household maintenance by men and clothing by women are practically identical at 25 minutes. Surprisingly, men spend a meagre 2 hours per day on clothes, washing, ironing and sewing.

Overall, at the time the data was collected, women’s dedication on household was overshadowing their male counterparts.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33939393939 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05333068678 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624242424242 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9393382015 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.125 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115283032118 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473447217913 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681191413903 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0747129259201 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585159811328 0.0819641961636 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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