Different cultures are mixing today and the world is becoming a global village. Is it a positive or negative development in your opinion? To what extent do you support this development?
Experts throughout the developing and developed world have debated whether the formation of united community around the globe is generally positive or not. This essay will assert the notion that the ensuing downside given by this phenomenon is evidently outweigh its upside.
To begin with, blending cultures from foreign countries might damage local cultures. Admittedly, by sharing thoughts and cultural works, citizens who live in a cosmopolitan city can expose to various cultures, which in turn complement their own culture. However, compared with those incorporated merits, the intrinsic value that is deeply ingrained in the tradition of host country could become vulnerable. In fact, instead of practising calligraphy, which is one of the traditional pastime in bygone era, nowadays, juniors in Hong Kong frequent amenities brought by western cultures in their leisure time, including fast food shops, cyber cafes and cinemas. This results in a general decadency on traditional handwriting. Therefore, it is conclusively clear that the development of the aboriginal culture could be hindered by globalisation in some regions.
Another implication that cannot be ignored is the societal disturbance. More specifically, the mix of cultures that is broadly begot by activities such as global tourism, student exchange and skilled immigration is often accompanied by the overcrowding problem. Take Hong Kong for example. Regardless of people identities, tourists and students are allowed to invest in the local real estate market, giving rose to the rent in both public and private housing in the last 20 years. Furthermore, the influx of mainland students creates additional demands on its local education system. Consistent with this line of thinking is that such phenomenon not only results in homeless or shortfall of educational seats for local students, but also add up to public riots and politic turmoil. Thus, it is possible to state beyond doubt that globalisation has an important role to play in recent disturbance in some Asian areas.
In conclusion, cultural diversity can bring about devastating effects to local culture and impose a treat on social stability. It is predicted that governments will enact any measures to limit the pace of globalisation in the foreseeable future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'outweighed'.
Suggestion: outweighed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1954.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5197740113 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96039267634 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66384180791 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3944964649 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.941176471 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8235294118 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145838221239 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387213509058 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04645759374 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0868997293951 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538175674501 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.61 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 78.4519038076 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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