Different cultures are mixing today and the world is becoming a global village. Is it a positive or negative development in your opinion? To what extent do you support this development?
(Updated August 2018)
Experts throughout the developing and developed world have debated whether the implication of globalisation is overall advantageous or not. This essay will assert the notion that the detrimental effects of this phenomenon are now becoming increasingly recognised by the public.
To begin with, blending cultures around the globe opens the door to societal development. Firstly, with the demand of communication between faraway countries, communication technology such as video conferencing and instant messaging software has an important role to play in various business sectors, resulting in the technological breakthrough over the past decades. Secondly, instead of interacting with limited amount of people in isolated areas, citizens who live in open economy can broaden their horizon and this can help incorporating merits from various cultures. For instance, by comparing the lifestyle from the East and the West, doctors has established that vegetarian eating habit is likely to be a factor of longevity in some Asian countries. Therefore it is conclusively clear that globalisation enrich our lives.
Although there is a case for globalisation facilitating the social growth, the detrimental effects to local environment and culture cannot be neglected. In fact, activities that are connected with cultural diversity such as heavy logistics, frequent use of airline and global tourism have posed a threat on local environment on account of carbon emission and exhaust fumes. In addition, compared to closed economy, the majority of open economy have seen evidently a surge in demands of housing and commodities, resulting in economic inflation in some developing nations. Furthermore, the invasion of foreign cultures might deter the development of their local counterparts. Take calligraphy in Hong Kong for example. While a significant amount of people enjoyed calligraphy a couple of decades ago, cinemas and cyber cafes have become the most well-received amenities among juniors nowadays.
In conclusion, given the severity of housing problems in some Asian countries, the downside of globalisation somehow outweighs its upside, despite the ensuing colour and vibrancy. It is predicted that the government will enact any measures to ease the tension in the real estate market in the foreseeable future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 529, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to incorporate' or 'incorporate'.
Suggestion: to incorporate; incorporate
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Line 3, column 758, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1979.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70317002882 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11339507796 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636887608069 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4013093758 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.933333333 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1333333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111689606246 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356279126888 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439383996279 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0706008991791 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672206593586 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.08 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.06 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 78.4519038076 176% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.