The chart shows the division of household tasks by gender in Great Britain

Essay topics:

The chart shows the division of household tasks by gender in Great Britain

The bar chart demonstrates the division of household tasks by gender in Great Britain.

Overall, females spend more time on housework than males in most of tasks. However, gardening, pet care and maintenance odd jobs take more time of males than females.

Women use 74 minutes a day to cook, bake and wash up while this number of men is 30 minutes. This figure is lightly higher than time a person spends on cleaning and house tidying with 58 minutes to females and 13 minutes to males. Women are also the main caregivers with 45 minutes a day spend on caring of children and playing with them compare with 20 minutes males offer. Males do not wash, iron and sew clothes as much as females with only 2 minutes a day while females do these work 25 minutes daily.

On the other hand, males also spend an approximately 2-folds higher amount of time on gardening and pet caring with 49,5 minutes a day than females with 21 minutes. Maintenance odd jobs are also taken a lot of time of males with 26 minutes a day compare to only 9,5 minutes of females.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the tasks') or simply say ''most tasks''.
Suggestion: most of the tasks; most tasks
...nd more time on housework than males in most of tasks. However, gardening, pet care and maint...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52083333333 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32902783576 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536458333333 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.9550524387 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4444444444 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0790268408985 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784530860482 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.221898836599 0.0843802449381 263% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176519443608 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.305740644854 0.0819641961636 373% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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