The chart shows expected city visits by country of origin for 2021

Essay topics:

The chart shows expected city visits by country of origin for 2021.

The bar chart compares four different cities in terms of their future visits paid by citizens coming from the US, Canada, and Mexico in 2021.

It is predicted that Madrid will be the most attractive location among others, whereas Liverpool will welcome the lowest number of tourists in the year 2021. Overall, Americans are expected to go on trips to the listed cities most frequently, compared to Canadians and Mexicans.

In 2021, there will be a hundred thousand of Americans taking a trip to Madrid, compared with only about 80 and 70 thousand of Canadian and Mexican people respectively. By contrast, Liverpool will receive a much smaller number of visitors from the USA, only half as many as the ones going to Madrid. There will also be approximately 30 thousand people coming from Canada and almost 20 thousand from Mexico flying to Liverpool in the same year.

Looking at the other cities, Roma is estimated to be the second popular tourist attraction with the US citizens, welcoming 80 thousand of them, which is followed by roughly 50 thousand of Canadians. This will not be the case for the Mexicans visiting Roma, whose number will only be one fourth of the Americans’. However, the figures for people from all three nations going on a holiday in Paris are forecasted to be almost equal to each other, which will vary between 60 and 68 thousand of tourists.

Votes
Average: 8.7 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, second, so, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87619047619 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61542606753 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6781711411 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100730534717 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505585177701 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386720680793 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0730112874323 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318927714433 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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