The chart shows the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in selected countries Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given

Essay topics:

The chart shows the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in selected countries.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.

The presented vertical bar chart illustrates the information on the proportion of cell phones or landlines used per 100 people in seven different countries.

It is conspicuous that there are four out of seven countries where mobile phones are more popular than landlines. But among these, Itay has the most mobile phone users as well as the least working landlines.

Countries like Germany, UK, Sweden, and Italy have a more advanced way of communication as people here preferred mobile phones more than landlines. More specifically, Italy has the highest proportion of mobile phone users at around 90 per 100 people, followed by, Sweden and UK at close to 87 and 85 respectively. The countries like Germany and Denmark consists a decent proportion of mobile phone users at around 70 and 82 percent, respectively. While, mobile phones in Canada are least preferred, as it accounts to only 37 percent of people using it.

In contrast to this, the most proportion of the people in Canada, the US, and Denmark still use landlines as their mode of communication. Denmark has the highest percentage of people using the landlines, at around 87 per 100 people. The proportion of users of landlines in the US and Sweden are almost equal, about 67 percent, followed by, Canada at 62 per 100 people. Whereas, Italy's population least preferred it, used by only 42 out of 100 people.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 333, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... it, used by only 42 out of 100 people.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, well, whereas, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97340425532 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78204710641 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542553191489 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.9434332422 43.030603864 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.888888889 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 5.23603664747 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226644456575 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106938829783 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533124542941 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158636248344 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512548116628 0.0819641961636 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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