Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is often argued that gaining knowledge about the history of humankind is a wastage of time, for those of all living in the present. History does play a vital role in our contemporary era. Without gaining experience from past activities, it will be difficult to proceed further. I personally believe that there is a lot of knowledge and learnings that we can gain from past activities, for a better living.
There is an eminent fact, 'Experience does matter'. Without the experience, we as a human would not have been able to develop or even evolve further. For instance, numerous valuable lessons can be learned from older people, which help us to grow further in life. Albeit it is in the past but the situations and conditions can still be witnessed in our contemporary era. Ranging from little to bigger decisions past experiences does give an individual a sense of taking the right decision at the right time. In schools and institutes, history is even taught as a subject. This is the rich heritage of the human race we are talking about. How can we let it be lost?
Moreover, businesses and the stock market can never run smoothly if there is nobody with some valuable past experience on board. To imply a new business strategy to a particular business one has to study numerous business strategies and decisions that were taken in the past by some other authorities. What is more, in the share market 'History always repeats itself' is a famous saying. For instance, all the studies and learning are always performed on the previous activities that have already happened. As the decisions and the activities taken back then do provide us the necessary knowledge on what and how to execute something.
To conclude, I am completely against the statement stating that the knowledge about past activities is totally useless, specifically to those of us living in the modern era. Almost every field whether it is the personal life, business decisions or the share market etcetera significance of having a valuable experience of the past will always be fruitful.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 409, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
...Ranging from little to bigger decisions past experiences does give an individual a sense of taki...
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Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...y if there is nobody with some valuable past experience on board. To imply a new business strat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, still, then, as to, for instance, talking about, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90313390313 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73937809294 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518518518519 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5135468063 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5789473684 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4736842105 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42105263158 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213372457495 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630765002205 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573454103098 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136853949779 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425621310787 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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