The charts below give information about the price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne, Australia, over a two-week period in 2013.
Given are the two bar charts contrasting the disproportionation in round tickets for flights back and forth between Melbourne and Sydney of an undefined airline within two weeks in the year 2013.
Perceptibly, there seemed not to be any drastic disparity in costs for flying between these two nations. Furthermore, the tickets cost passengers much on Fridays and weekends than on the weekdays.
Regarding flight tickets to travel from Sydney to Melbourne, the first-week Monday’s ticket, whose costs on the next Monday experienced a sustained plunge by 30$, was by far the highest price to be acquired with 60$ paid. However, there was no change recorded in the prices of the tickets on the other days. When the lowest price a customer could pay was approximately 35$ for Tuesdays and Wednesdays’ flights and 5$ higher on the next day’s trip, the unchanged-cost Fridays’ ticket with roughly 77$ surpassed Monday’s to become the most costly ticket in week 2. Additionally, to fly on Saturdays and Sundays, flight-goers were required to pay 67$ and 50$ respectively.
Likewise, the lowest 37-dollar ticket was purchased for each flight from Melbourne to Sydney on Tuesdays to Thursdays in the two weeks; by contrast, the Fridays’ ticket price ranked first with 80$, followed by 60$ tickets for any flights departing on Monday and Saturday of the first week. In the interim, with 50 dollars, passengers were able to fly to Sydney on Sunday. A week later brought a marginal 20 dollar diminution in the ticket price of the ticket on Monday and Friday which was 10$ higher than that of the weekend’s.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...r the highest price to be acquired with 60$ paid. However, there was no change reco...
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$35'.
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... a customer could pay was approximately 35$ for Tuesdays and Wednesdays’ flights an...
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$5'.
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...or Tuesdays and Wednesdays’ flights and 5$ higher on the next day’s trip, the unch...
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$77'.
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...anged-cost Fridays’ ticket with roughly 77$ surpassed Monday’s to become the most c...
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$67'.
Suggestion: $67
...days, flight-goers were required to pay 67$ and 50$ respectively. Likewise, the lo...
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$50'.
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...ight-goers were required to pay 67$ and 50$ respectively. Likewise, the lowest 37-...
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$80'.
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...Fridays’ ticket price ranked first with 80$, followed by 60$ tickets for any flight...
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...rice ranked first with 80$, followed by 60$ tickets for any flights departing on Mo...
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...e ticket on Monday and Friday which was 10$ higher than that of the weekend’s.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, likewise, regarding
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 965.302439024 139% => OK
No of words: 266.0 196.424390244 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06015037594 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90036558504 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 106.607317073 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545112781955 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 283.868780488 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.5440138442 43.030603864 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.6 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243775421033 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104310712526 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830501795227 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175860347905 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.088182452238 0.0819641961636 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 40.7170731707 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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