The charts below give information about the price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne, Australia, over a two-week period in 2013.
Given are two bar charts depicting the ticket’s price of an undetermined airline between Sydney and Melbourne within 14 days in 2013.
It is conspicuous that the cost of two flights on some particular days including Monday, Friday, Saturday and Sunday was further higher than the other day during the time frame. Furthermore, with the exception of the first week of the route from Sydney to Melbourne, Friday had by far the dominant cost fare for passengers in total 7 days.
When it comes to the flight from Sydney to Melbourne, the ticket was more likely to remain its cost in individual days during two weeks, apart from Monday. Monday was the day in a week occupying the highest fare with exactly $80, meanwhile, the price on the same day plunged by $30 and it was similar to Sunday. The second and third in terms of price with roughly $75 and 65$ was recorded on Friday and Saturday. Thereafter, Tuesday and Wednesday stayed intact over the given phrase with approximately $35.
Regarding the price of flight from Melbourne to Sydney, it reached its zenith with $80 on Friday on the first week, however it witnessed a drastically slum to $60 on the second week and this decline price between two weeks was similar to Monday and Saturday. In the interim, the fare on Tuesday, Wednesday and Thursday shares the lowest value with about $35.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 191, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...day during the time frame. Furthermore, with the exception of the first week of the route from Sydney...
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Line 3, column 366, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$65'.
Suggestion: $65
...rd in terms of price with roughly 5 and 65$ was recorded on Friday and Saturday. T...
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Line 3, column 369, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in terms of price with roughly 5 and 65$ was recorded on Friday and Saturday. The...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, regarding, second, so, third, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1104.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 234.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71794871795 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52450912493 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534188034188 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9675816452 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.666666667 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 5.23603664747 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227092820338 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100387174492 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104076113169 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178551082524 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113334614109 0.0819641961636 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.