Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In modern societies, advertising through social platforms has a profound impact on the process of trading goods and food. It is thought that this is a paramount way to boost customers to purchase products. On the contrary, some people believe that buyers do not focus on this method of marketing, therefore, it doesn't divert them whether to buy these products or not. From my perspective, humans cannot deny the importance of advertising in simulating them to buy goods.
Admittedly, advertising appears omnipresent through social networking sites and disrupts users when they use these media which contributed to the ignoring mentioned products. When it comes to the presence of advertising on the Internet, sometimes it bothers users with high intensity, they can exist in the middle of a movie or a video on Youtube and people are more likely to interfere and then eliminate this advertising in the long-standing. In addition, there are a number of advertisements which are usually about products that do not have the right origins as well as not suit the demand of humans. Therefore, people tend to get rid of the advertising when they use social media.
On the other hand, advertising plays a pivotal role in promoting the widespread information of products and increasing the myriad of customers. It is conspicuous that a volume of goods and food are published on the gold time frame on the TV programs that make people believe in the precise and safe of these products leading to customers usually paying close attention and encouraging them to buy these products. Furthermore, with the proliferation of the Internet, goods are able to meet the needs of humans easily. From my point of view, I presume that companies need to take advantage of using advertising to encourage customers to purchase products.
To sum up, although advertising bothers users whenever they use social platforms, it does a favor for the growth of the economy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...this method of marketing, therefore, it doesnt divert them whether to buy these produc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, well, in addition, as well as, on the contrary, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07476635514 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92661511608 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523364485981 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3716920936 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.307692308 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200147556077 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691521172864 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390571940262 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114568290035 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403391396504 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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