The charts below give information about the price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne, Australia, over a two-week period in 2013.
The bar charts give information about how much airline tickets cost from Sydney and Melbourne within two weeks in 2013.
In general, the flying cost from the two locations had no distinct differences. It can be seen that Weekends and Mondays had the highest airline ticket prices on the chart, while the rest had the opposite trend.
The ticket price of first-week Monday from Sydney to Melbourne accounted for $80, which was the highest price to be paid. On Tuesday, and Wednesday, passengers only paid $35 for an airline ticket, while they only paid an extra $5 for Thursday. On the weekends, the cost of tickets significantly went up to $75. There was no change in the price of the airline ticket, except Monday reduced to $50.
From Melbourne to Sydney, in week one, the price of tickets on Mondays was only $60 and continually decreased for the next three days, to $35. Fridays sold the most expensive tickets and more than Saturdays and Sundays. A week later showed a $20 decrease (13) in the price of Monday tickets, but a stable price range at $50 (14) for Saturday and Sunday.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ne ticket, while they only paid an extra for Thursday. On the weekends, the cost ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61052631579 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4860831479 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552631578947 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2644018334 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.6 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338367091906 0.215688989381 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142282567257 0.103423049105 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12323397411 0.0843802449381 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237658272467 0.15604864568 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132286565225 0.0819641961636 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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