The graph shows the number of boys and girls playing sports in an English town in 2012

Essay topics:

The graph shows the number of boys and girls playing sports in an English town in 2012.

The bar chart gives information about how many boys and girls took part in physical activities in a particular town in the UK.
In general, it can be seen that football was the most common activity for boys, while more girls participated in swimming than other sports. The boys enjoyed all activities more than the girls, except badminton and swimming.
Football was the most common option chosen by boys, and three times boys played soccer as much as girls did, at 60 and 30 participants. More boys played tennis than girls, at approximately 37 and 20 people respectively. Eighteen girls less than boys took part in riding a bike. Although hockey was the less common sport in both sexes, the number of boys still outlooked girls, 15 boys compared with nine girls.
Swimming was the most popular sport among girls, with 50 girls and 40 boys. The number of girls was 40 while just 30 boys played badminton.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 412, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, still, while, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 751.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75316455696 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43417589868 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575949367089 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5207162919 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4444444444 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240087198387 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113801620631 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551136846327 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151753728315 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652525215516 0.0819641961636 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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