The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000, and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where

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The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000, and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show information regarding USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000, and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years.

In both 1970 and 1980 there was 2.5 million recorded marriages which showed a constant trend but in 1990 it started to decrease to merely 2.25 million moreover the downward trend continued in year 200 with 2 million recorded marriages. There was unsteady trend for the number of divorces.

In 1970 and 200 there was 1 million recorded divorces while in 1980 it was the year that recorded the highest with almost 1.5 million divorces.

There was 60% and 70% recorded married american adults for year 1970 and 2000 respectively. The lowest percentage of marital status in 1970 was those who got divorced with merely 2%, while in 2000 the lowest was those got widowed with approximately 5%.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, regarding, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 714.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92413793103 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44293735595 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544827586207 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 198.9 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7044673795 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224657844352 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150003836713 0.103423049105 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.210215623497 0.0843802449381 249% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203935732782 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.238834297564 0.0819641961636 291% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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