The given chart provides an information regarding the most or less prevalent age -group for marriage under different age-groups during the period between 1996and 2008 in a respective country. The available data will be discussed with the following features and required comparisons with be made in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, In the year of 1996, the 25-29 age-group had a higher level of percentage in terms of estimated 11.9% (female) and 8.5% (male). After this age-group, the female percentage followed a high decreasing trend, while, male proportion decreasing at a lower speed except at 30-34 , where, male proportion was constant by 8.5%.
Secondly, In the other year 2008,the female proportion was constant at 11.9% as in the previous year 1996 and went down in other age -groups.On the other side, male percentage was higher in the 30-34 age group by approximately 11% and lower down in other age - group.
In the conclusion, it seems to me that the suitable age - group is 25 - 29, because, the male and female proportion was high over the other age-groups.
Thank you. It's helpful.
Thank you. It's helpful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 901.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11931818182 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80111860372 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596590909091 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.5114021403 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.166666667 112.824112599 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 5.23603664747 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 1.69756097561 1119% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110318795179 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608456930796 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351629212231 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0724475397888 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368139267734 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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