In the contemporary era, a job is considered as a main necessity for people to survive their lives, but still a large number of individuals day by day are changing their employment opportunities. This essay will discuss the reasons behind this such as they are not receiving good salary and promotions which are leading enticing obstacles in their lives. To begin with, the main prominent reason of changing the jobs is that the persons are not fulfilled with sufficient salary. As, the employers are not giving promotions to them according to their hard work which decrease the confidence in the employees. For example, a survey was conducted by the researchers that the workers were regularly changing their jobs because they were not becoming able to fulfil their requirements with their salary. It is therefore clear that this peculiar reason is putting the force in the persons to shift their jobs from one place to other. However, there are a lot of drawbacks are arising which easily outweigh it's advantages like they do not become able to adopt every new scenario.This is because, they have less co-operation power, so they are not becoming able to do their team work. Due to this, they do not easily set their goal and do not become a successful person.For instance, it is seen that the persons who are regularly change their jobs, do not achieve their target in comparison with others. Consequently, these are the particular obstacles which make them less experienced persons. To conclude, a job is an indispensable part in the persons's life. Although, the persons are facing some serious problems in their jobs, but they have to remain in their jobs then they will become able to achieve the higher level of job.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...eople to survive their lives, but still a large number of individuals day by day are changing the...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ding enticing obstacles in their lives. To begin with, the main prominent reason...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e not fulfilled with sufficient salary. As, the employers are not giving promotion...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ift their jobs from one place to other. However, there are a lot of drawbacks ar...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...become able to adopt every new scenario.This is because, they have less co-operation...
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Suggestion: For
...l and do not become a successful person.For instance, it is seen that the persons w...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'changed'.
Suggestion: changed
...seen that the persons who are regularly change their jobs, do not achieve their target...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ich make them less experienced persons. To conclude, a job is an indispensable p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, so, still, then, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90410958904 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68514117157 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527397260274 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.6378552152 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.181818182 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5454545455 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302407392518 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115041602369 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675191047114 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302407392518 0.151304729494 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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