The charts below give information on UK spending habits for books bought
over the internet.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.
The given line chart depicts the data of expenditure of bought books from the internet from 1997 to 2002. The pie chart illustrates the information about money spent by the UK over the internet in six different sovereign states namely - Northern Ireland, England, Scotland, Wales. All figures shows in pounds.
Overall, trend showed upward tendency for purchased book in the UK over a six years of period. Whereas, the highest proportion of bought books Shared by England over the given period.
Expenditure on books in 1997, stood at just over 10 million. Interestingly, this trend increased and reached at around 22 million in 2000. Money spent on books via internet was went up and achieved the peak point at a little under 25 million in 2002.
In terms of sales of books from internet, England had the highest proportion at 81%, followed by Wales, which constituted one in ten million. The rate for Scotland and Northern Ireland were took backseat with 8 per cent and 1 per cent merely.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...k in the UK over a six years of period. Whereas, the highest proportion of bought books...
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Line 7, column 191, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
... for Scotland and Northern Ireland were took backseat with 8 per cent and 1 per cent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91124260355 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54832871482 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621301775148 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4026040784 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.23603664747 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143430708181 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536100192236 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042133333431 0.0843802449381 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870638816319 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421562214793 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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