The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features make comparisons where relevant.

Essay topics:

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts describes that three types of nutrients such as sodium, saturated fats and added sugar in a typical meal consumed in the USA with average percentages. they consume typical meals according to breakfast, lunch, snack and dinner times.

In the breakfast time, they consume nutrients such as sodium of 14%, both saturated fats and added sugar are same of 16% . Although, in lunch time they are taking sodium and saturated fats nearly as double as its breakfast but the sugar nutrients is slightly increased when compared to its breakfast.

Looking at the detail, the snacks time sodium nutrients is same as its breakfast. While, saturated fats are slightly bitten low of its lunch. Whereas, sugar nutrients highly increased to 42%. however, all three nutrients are enormously increased.

Overall, all three nutrients are differs intake according to meal time. In breakfast time, they take minimal nutrients whereas, in lunch time moderate nutrients are taken and in dinner time, consuming nutrients are very high. however, consuming limited intake of nutrients leads to good health but it leads prone to health when it takes more or limit exceeds.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, whereas, while, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 980.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24064171123 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51572690231 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513368983957 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.0382757329 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0909090909 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0617578632809 0.215688989381 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373673709281 0.103423049105 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530589801298 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0535043502802 0.15604864568 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572779876599 0.0819641961636 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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