The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
Average percentages of sodium, saturated fats and added sugars in typical meals consumed in the USA
The three pie charts in question show what percentage of daily intake of sodium, saturated fat and added sugar by an average person in USA in each meal throughout the course of the day. The charts illustrate the 4 meals of the day namely breakfast, lunch, dinner and snacks.
For Sodium, the charts reveal 43% of daily sodium intake occurs at night which is supper. Lunches come second in this category where 29% of sodium is digested. The least amount of sodium is eaten in snacks and during breakfast. Quite a similar trend is observed for saturated fat ingestion. It mostly occurs at night as per the pie -data, which shows 37%. Next in line is lunch where 26% of daily fat is absorbed. Breakfast ranks the lowest in terms of daily consumption of saturated fat at 16. The third spot is occupied by snacks where 21% of the added fats are consumed.
Added sugar displays a rare anomaly, as is revealed by the charts. As per the information illustrated by the charts, most of the ingestion of added sugar occurs during snacks. 42% of the total daily intake occurs in this meal. Whereas, 23% of the daily sugar intake is carried out at dinner and 19% through lunch. Added sugar consumption at breakfast remains the least with a meager 16% share. So, overall the charts reflect a common trend that breakfast is the meal of the day when all three nutrients are least consumed by people of USA.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, so, third, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1150.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 249.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61847389558 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34111401379 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5140562249 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 335.7 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6493290238 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.875 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5625 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.625 5.23603664747 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.09268292683 342% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116366305548 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397525454873 0.103423049105 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397720142518 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922994932306 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319814579206 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.2329268293 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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