The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts demonstrates the average of consumption sodium, saturated sugar and added sugar in different meal-time when the data took from United States of America. Overall, it is clear that the healthiest nutrient of american people is when it comes to breakfast-time with very little unhealthy nourishment added while the unhealthiest are dinner and snack-time.

In the first chart, describes the average percentage of sodium which added mostly in the dinner meals over 43% by american. Following this, through the lunch time, sodium added for almost 29% while breakfast and snacks are contains an equal number of sodium. Afterwards, the second chart tell us about how much saturated fat added, 37% is biggest quantity of saturated fat added at the dinner while both snack and lunch meals is 26% and 21% for each. Besides, on the breakfast only 16% contains the nutrient given.

The last but not least is the third chart illustrates portion of added sugar. snacks take in the highest amount (42%), a typical dinner include 23% of added sugar while lunch carry 19% and then breakfast only 16% accommodated added sugar.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You should probably use 'demonstrate'.
Suggestion: demonstrate
The charts demonstrates the average of consumption sodium, satu...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the biggest'.
Suggestion: is the biggest
...about how much saturated fat added, 37% is biggest quantity of saturated fat added at the ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Snacks
...art illustrates portion of added sugar. snacks take in the highest amount 42%, a typic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, second, so, then, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.125 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56686917159 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619565217391 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1246612454 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.875 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0812720881016 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427940439374 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453303588989 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0565164687496 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214711877197 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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