The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the proportion of people who posses and lease accommodation from 1918 to 2011 in two different British countries named England and Wales.
Overall, it can be seen in the graph that the trend of citizen who owned houses was increase significantly given the period, while those who rented accommodation decrease over the same time
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 1.1em;">At the first glance, the percentage of tenant accommodation</span><br></p><p class="MsoNormal">moderately went down just over 9% from 1918 to 1939 and remained equal in 1953.
Regardless, the amount was went down quickly until 2001 and then there was a
steadily increase over 7% in 2011.</p><p class="MsoNormal">A clear difference in another graph, the percentage of families
owned their houses were substantially increased over 10% from 1918 to 1939.
Furthermore, the percentage was remained stable until 1953 and dramatically
increased until 1991. However, there was a slightly rise in the proportion of home
owner from 1991 to 2001 before decreased slowly over next 10 years.</p>
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Owned
...her graph, the percentage of families owned their houses were substantially increas...
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Suggestion: Increased
...ed stable until 1953 and dramatically increased until 1991. However, there was a slight...
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...ncreased until 1991. However, there was a slightly rise in the proportion of home owner from ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.16666666667 4.92477711251 125% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.28829361729 2.65546596893 199% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641975308642 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.059063506 43.030603864 302% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 199.8 112.824112599 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.4 22.9334400587 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 5.23603664747 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 3.83414634146 235% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104689724928 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618545168345 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475518022563 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0455850197639 0.15604864568 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429433973592 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.8 13.2329268293 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 61.2550243902 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 10.3012195122 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.1 11.4140731707 167% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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