The charts below show the distribution of the world s water and the use of water in three countries

Essay topics:

The charts below show the distribution of the world's water and the use of water in three countries.

The pie chart illustrates the percentage of the world's water and the table compares the water consumption in three different countries.
Overall, while salt water accounts for nearly the whole amount of water in the world, agriculture experiences the highest water use in Egypt and Saudi Arabia.
As can be seen from the pie chart, slat water stands at precisely 97% in comparison with only 3% fresh water. Meanwhile, the figure for fresh water in ice and glaciers is the highest, at about 79%, which is approximately four times as much as that for ground water. Surface water accounts for only 1 percent in the total fresh water in the world.
We can see from the bar chart is that about 80% water is used for agriculture in Egypt while this figure for Saudi Arabia is nearly 75% as opposed to only 10% in Canada. Besides, industry consumes the largest amount of water in Canada, at about 80%, which is nearly eight times as much as in other two countries. Domestic water use accounts for about 15% in Egypt and Saudi Arabia and approximately 10% in Canada.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67914438503 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44151469856 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491978609626 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4363720591 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.375 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356659304601 0.215688989381 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202472498434 0.103423049105 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911905172683 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274815667321 0.15604864568 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711450590852 0.0819641961636 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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