In today's world, it's private companies rather than government pay for and conduct most scientific research. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that in the present-day world, the majority of scientific research is undertaken and funded by private companies instead of central governments. Although this dominant trend is disadvantageous in some aspects, I believe these are outweighed by the advantages.
This trend, in my opinion, probably leads to the misuse of scientific research to cause social chaos and dangers, as some terrorist or criminal organizations are likely to tempt profit-driven biotech companies to sell them their products by offering huge amounts of money. Many experts, in fact, have foreseen and been warning of biological terrorism. Furthermore, some major corporations, having conducted research on their products, choose to cover the deadly side effects. For example, the fact that smoking can kill had long been hidden from the buyers until scientists discovered the truth.
I, however, believe that private organizations are superior in making scientific progress. As a matter of fact, countless inventions that set the standards of life, such as car, light bulb, computer and many types of medicine, were created with profitability in mind. Moreover, without having to deal with unnecessary bureaucracy, private organizations are certainly more agile and efficient in the use of capital, in contrast to their government counterparts, who often suffer from a cumbersome bureaucratic system.
In conclusion, research activity is a worthwhile investment which may offer great social and economic benefits. Governments should attempt to reduce administrative tasks and only step in to regulate if any problems arise.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, such as, as a matter of fact, in contrast to, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65843621399 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14653122898 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679012345679 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2162768693 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.7272727273 7.06120827912 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169205427394 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571548028097 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485114388937 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980008118941 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565942423623 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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