The charts below show the growth in the population in some of the world’s largest cities as well as the population distribution in urban and rural areas.
The diagrams illustrate the growing number of people living in several largest cities in the world and the distribution of people resided in rural areas and urban areas.
Overall, there was an upward trend in the number of populations in the cities, and in 2010, the top-five most populated cities in the world changed. Also, the number of people inhabiting the urban area increased gradually in the meantime.
In the meantime, India and Jakarta witnessed a dramatic change in the number of citizens. In 1970, the number of people living in Bombay was approximately 5 million, increasing by 5-times higher in the next three-decade. Jakarta was initially having around 2.5 million residents and it rose to about 18 million in the final year. Both Shanghai and Tokyo experienced a moderate increase in the number of population, it showed approximately 8-10 million change in 2010, while the number of people inhabited in new york saw a slight difference during the period.
The table shows that the most crowded city in 1950 was New York with 12,5 million people, followed by London at 7,9 million residents. The remaining cities were inhibited by 5 million citizens each. However, 50-year latter, all the top-5 most populated cities changed except for Tokyo moving to the first place with the increase of population by 3 times higher. All the new entry cities were occupied by more 20 million people.
In 1980, 3 billion people inhabited in the rural areas and this figure slightly changed in the next three-decade. In contrast, the urban’ population increased gradually and ending the period at around 4 billion.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, while, except for, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 965.302439024 142% => OK
No of words: 267.0 196.424390244 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13483146067 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69238117335 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 106.607317073 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520599250936 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 283.868780488 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4709864862 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.461538462 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203923439937 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762202728324 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784322942036 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139163969826 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741850299577 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 40.7170731707 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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