The table below show how many tourists from five countries visited Australia in different years from 2006 to 2010

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The table below show how many tourists from five countries visited Australia in different years from 2006 to 2010.

The number of tourist from different nations in the world (New Zealand, Japan, Canada, China, Germany and France) between 2006 and 2010 is illustrated in the graph below.

Overall, there was an increasing trend in the number of tourists visiting australia during the period and New Zealand’s visitor accounted as the highest figure during years.

To begin with, the number from almost the countries experienced an increase and new zealand observed as the most significant rise among the countries. It stood at 979 in the beginning and finished the period at around 1011 in 2010. Following which china and france, the former stood at 267 in 2006 and ending the period at 360 visitors, while the latter commenced at 61 then accounted at almost 30% increase at the end of the reported year.

In 2006, the number of germany tourist was 143 followed by Canada just below 100. Both countries saw a small rose in the number of visitor to australia and ending the period at 159 and 118 each. Although the number of japan's tourist stood as the second-highest number in 2006, however, it decreased to about 30% in the final year.

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Average: 8.7 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, then, while, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84974093264 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53730522335 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549222797927 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0610032396 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20265647321 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966922350469 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610547248274 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137141188062 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065622851168 0.0819641961636 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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