The charts below show information about honey-bee colonies and honey production in the US.
The charts give information about the numbers of honey-bee colonies and phony production in the United State from 1970-2010.
There were 4 millions honey-ice colonies in 1970. However, these measures rose to 4.2 millions in 1980. but over 30 next years. these amounts decreased to 1 million every ten years. For instance, From 1990-2010, these numbers dropped from 3.5 millions to 1.8 millions
In 1970, the quantities of honey production were 130.000 tonnes. Differ from 1970, the honey productions fell 110.000 tonnes in 1980. but at the next 10 years, it suddenly went up 120.000 tonnes in 1990. Then, the measure of honey productions continually decreased every 10 years. Detail, in 2000 and 2010, these measures dropped respective 100.000 tonnes and 2010.
Generally speaking, The charts show that the quantity of both bee colonies and honey production have fallen during the 40-year period. Though, the relationship is not really concerned with each other. Because, when colonies rose in 1980, honey production fell. On the other hands, when colonies decreased in 1990, honey production increased.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... have fallen during the 40-year period. Though, the relationship is not really concern...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, then, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40804597701 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5756681827 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603448275862 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8998567332 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.2142857143 112.824112599 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.4285714286 22.9334400587 54% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354305394051 0.215688989381 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133483018044 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136707310632 0.0843802449381 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253384086145 0.15604864568 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150268629088 0.0819641961636 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 61.2550243902 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 13.21 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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