The charts below show the levels of participation in education and science in developing and industrialised countries in 1980 and 1990.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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The charts below show the levels of participation in education and science in developing and industrialised countries in 1980 and 1990.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The charts provided illustrates the level of participation in average years of schooling and science in developed and industrialized countries, in the time frame of 1980 to 1990.

Overall, the figures for both developed and developing countries increased significantly in schooling and scientists. The cost used by the developed countries are remarkably inflated compared to the developing countries.

According to the first chart, in 1980, people in developing nations spent about three years in school and slowly increased to 4 years in 1990. While in the developed countries, the average years of schooling of citizens here were a lot higher than in developing nations, from 8.5 years to 11 years.

Turning to the second chart, the level of participants in science in developing countries saw a slight rise from 10 to 18 people over the period of 10 years. On the contrary, the number of scientists in developed countries considerably jumped from 41 people to nearly 70 people in 1980 and 1990.

Lastly, the final chart shows the citizens in developed nations had a trend that they spent excessive amounts of money on research and development. The funds costs them from 150 billion dollars in 1980 and drastically rose up to 350 billion dollars within 10 years. Compared to developing countries, they suffered a slight fall on funds of 50 billion dollars on research in 1980 and 1990.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, lastly, second, while, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14035087719 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91463126447 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478070175439 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 328.5 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.859551688 43.030603864 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 117.2 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237301300822 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110867643042 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538782227865 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151611553844 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499653631294 0.0819641961636 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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