The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists traveling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market.

Essay topics:

The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists traveling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market.

The designed graphs illustrate the number of Japanese tourists traveling aboard and sharing data of Japan's traveler market in Australia from 1985 to 1995.
Overall, it is clear that the numbers of traveling aboard steadily increased, whereas the percentage of Japanese tourists that select Australia their destination had a considerable fluctuation tendency from year to year.

The Japanese tourists were increased slightly from 4.2 in 1985 to 8.1 in 1988, which showed double the number. Meanwhile, people traveled to Australia rising from 2% to 4.8% over the same period. The figure given for the Australian market between 1988 and 1989 had a gradually fallen by 4.8 to 4.2, respectively, while Japanese tourists trend had approximately 700 thousand grew.

In 1991, however, people were thus less likely to travel aboard, compared to 1990, but there was an upward trend in Australia tourist market about 5.1%. The amount of Japan citizens traveled to foreign countries reached 15 million at the end of 1992 to 1995 period. In addition, Australia can draw the attention of Japanese and peaked at more than 6 percent, but after that, it had decreased to 6%. In fact, there was no information about Australian market in 1995.

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Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, thus, whereas, while, in addition, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1035.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20100502513 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67883975251 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628140703518 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5869810308 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432524449001 0.215688989381 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174921999483 0.103423049105 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120017175845 0.0843802449381 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.289448644381 0.15604864568 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106256192441 0.0819641961636 130% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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