Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Perhaps no event in the world is as likely to cause to coexist peacefully as FIFA World Cup and Olympics which athlete shows their performance every 4 years. Some people believe that the sporting events play the vital role to remove the disputes between nations and also arise nationalistically but the criticisms argue that it actually fuel further tensions. There is a little room for doubt that can reduce tensions but it may unify a nation.
Obviously, the sporting events can bring nations together, at least temporarily, opens up opportunities to have a better understanding of other cultures and it can also alter one's attitudes toward another country. Multicultural understanding has other implications. It can help to globalization and business development. For example, some tensions drive from Media pressure and government about Iran. They called Iranian people terrorist or enemy this event help to people now Iranian people are hospitable and try to have higher interaction so they know this view has flaws.
On the negative side, even if better mutual understanding between people with different countries increases, there is no insurance it will be maintained nations unifying or solve international tensions. in popular sports occasions, exhilarate intense patriotic emotions between fans of one team, when partiality or unfair fail. In this case, the international relationship gets even worse. In 1969, the match between Salvador and Honduras is a telling example that causes a terrible war and took hundreds of lives.
As suggested above, the sports events although having some impact on remove cultural barriers but unable to calm international tensions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, may, so, at least, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45593869732 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98215259471 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651340996169 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3729130473 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.538461538 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183492594658 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058610581444 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039371403767 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106304924225 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169375535672 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.